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Poetry Scansion
Believe it or not, this post was deleted from a poetry forum, so I'm looking for some help from the more poetical OOTers.
I do not want to prejudice anyone towards my interpretation, so I am going to hold off on any explanation until the results are in. What I would like is for people to read one of the versions (reading both might also bias the results) and then tell me how they scan it. Draft 1: <font color="white">stick out amid the shades of gray that one more simple operation</font> Draft 2: <font color="white">stand out among the swarms of gray that one more simple operation</font> Thank you, Scott |
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