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if you read something by Shakespeare of Marlowe or Yeats etc it doesn't even sound like they are trying to rhyme things. That isn't to say that people nowadays can't write poetry, I would say to look at rap and see an eminem or nas song to see how rhyming can be discreet not "THERE WAS FOG AND A DOG DOWN BY THE BOG" [/ QUOTE ]I agree 100% fwiw |
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THERE WAS FOG AND A DOG DOWN BY THE BOG [/ QUOTE ] I think we has a hit imo. |
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wtf is this.
rhyming and meter are dumb, syllable counts aren't. |
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Socrates' philosophies and hypotheses can't define how I be droppin these mockeries
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