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Old 04-05-2007, 11:31 PM
acidca acidca is offline
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

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"Later that night we finished off another case of beer and went out in the boat again."
-would perhaps sound better as-
"Later that night, after we'd finished yet another case of Labatt, we again found ourselves out on the lake."

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i disagree.

I like the rest of what you said. I'll add some sensory detail to my "king of the dock" paragraph

edit: actually I like the way you rewrote that line too
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Old 04-05-2007, 11:32 PM
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

btw im in community college so I get an A if I make <1 spelling mistake/word
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Old 04-05-2007, 11:59 PM
Jordache Jordache is offline
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

None of these are bad beats! You pwned some Frenchies, went 1-0-1 in chess, and then didn't get mangled. These are all total brags. Also, this could be better if you had a gf and posted pics of her too.
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Old 04-06-2007, 12:17 AM
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

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None of these are bad beats! You pwned some Frenchies, went 1-0-1 in chess, and then didn't get mangled. These are all total brags. Also, this could be better if you had a gf and posted pics of her too.

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I'm not him, but it can count for him that my GF is my Avatar...
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Old 04-06-2007, 09:01 AM
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

tl dr
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Old 04-06-2007, 09:10 AM
4ObliVioN4 4ObliVioN4 is offline
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

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I read the first sentence and then looked at the pictures and typed this and now am leaving

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You missed out. Very nice post OP.
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Old 04-06-2007, 11:44 AM
bmwguy525 bmwguy525 is offline
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

holy god there is no way I'm reading this. Correctly formatted paragraphs (correctly formatted for the respective forum, not converted from Word) go a long way in having someone want to read something.
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Old 04-06-2007, 07:30 PM
the crabs the crabs is offline
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Default Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint

did BJ die? if not then why are there X's in is eyes?
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Old 04-09-2007, 10:51 PM
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did BJ die? if not then why are there X's in is eyes?

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no, but he was all like "ow"

edit: btw I handed this in today, with a few modifications
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