micro story I just wrote, critique me to tears. *DELETED*

starvs · #1 03-28-2007, 03:37 AM

reposing this in the lounge. Sorry for the mistake.

TIEdup14 · #2 03-28-2007, 03:40 AM

you know the lounge is perfect for this sort of thing

Dynasty · #3 03-28-2007, 03:42 AM

[ QUOTE ]
you know the lounge is perfect for this sort of thing

[/ QUOTE ]

Don't they have a writing contest going right now?

starvs · #4 03-28-2007, 03:51 AM

wow owned myself hard. I honestly am barely aware of the lounges existence. I thought it was the same thing as laughs or links.

My bad, delete this if you want.