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02-16-2007, 03:32 AM
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Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
Commas and mechanics i agree... but... the thing about shoulders i don't understand.
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02-16-2007, 03:38 AM
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Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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Commas and mechanics i agree... but... the thing about shoulders i don't understand. [/ QUOTE ] sk00lb0y: how long have you been studying the english language?
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02-16-2007, 03:53 AM
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Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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[ QUOTE ] Commas and mechanics i agree... but... the thing about shoulders i don't understand. [/ QUOTE ] sk00lb0y: how long have you been studying the english language? [/ QUOTE ] que?
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02-16-2007, 04:07 AM
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Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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MARRY ME [/ QUOTE ] ??? so you liked it?
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02-16-2007, 01:21 PM
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Re: I wrote a story (kinda) what does OOT think?
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I think I would have started with something like, "I could feel the chalk under my finger tips" ( if they use chalk, I don't know) or some smaller detail of what its like to be wrestling. [/ QUOTE ] Or "The old herp was itchin"
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