Please berate my fishy play and suggest a better line!

[Grease]

Bet and raise at every opportunity, especially after you fill up.

There are a ton of draws on the board, and people may have a straight, so you'll get lots of action.

Don't hesitate to ram-and-jam on the flop in smallish pots when you have a monster, especially live. They'll call you down no matter what.

No worries, no one ever said poker was easy (cause it's damn hard.)