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[gurgeh]

I need a favor. I'll give details about the situation later, but what I need is for a few folks who know good writing from bad to look at two versions of a review of Snakes on a Plane. Then I need feedback. Despite not being paid for what I do, I can't post links on the forum here, so PM me if interested.

[pryor15]

ok, i'll bite.

are these 2 versions of the same review you've written?

[swede123]

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Pun intended?

[pryor15]

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Pun intended?

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