Making a TV show(kind of).

[David H]

Ok, my friends and I have created a series called "Downtown With Dave". The idea was that we would go downtown and do stupid stuff, interview people, etc. It's kind of branched out now(this is our second episode, the first wasn't planned, it just kind of happened, turned out to be a bust)

Anyways, now it's like a mix of SNL/Wonder Showzen/Andy Milonakis.

Well, here's a small part of our next episode. I'd appreciate some feedback(It's only about two minutes long). It's a parody of MTV's Fat Camp. Link.

Edit-If you couldn't guess from my username, I'm Dave. I'm the fat kid trying to lose weight. About 1 minute in, the staff guy(my friend Josh) says "come on you pork...." In the final version, it's going to be "Come on you pork **bleep**"(we don't want to swear in the show, and I think the bleep sounds funnier than if he actually said it) But our editor kind of sucks so it isn't in there yet.

[Full Metal]

You are Fat

[David H]

Well I have lost about 20 LBs since filming this, but yes, I am fat. Thank you. That's the reason I come to OOT, so I can find out things that people have told me since I was in 5th grade.

[Full Metal]

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Well I have lost about 20 LBs since filming this, but yes, I am fat. Thank you. That's the reason I come to OOT, so I can find out things that people have told me since I was in 5th grade.

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I'm just kiddding, you are very brave.

[David H]

What exactly makes me brave? Making this video? Posting it on the internet?

[RunDownHouse]

I didn't crack a smile once.

[Full Metal]

I think your editor is gonna get canned

[Empty_House]

We dont need any more jackass clones.

[David H]

Oh yeah there's definitely some editing issues. The first scene is supposed to be about 3 seconds shorter than it actually is(after I say "a little bit mean" it should go directly to the outdoor scene)

The "pork **bleep**" isn't in there

The transition of me running away from the camera to me running towards the camera with a wet shirt is pretty terrible

The letter part at the end is kind of choppy.

We have some other issues with him, some non-technical things. It sucks, but he's pretty much our only option.

[David H]

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We dont need any more jackass clones.

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Why do you feel that this is a Jackass clone? We don't do incredibly stupid things and injure ourselves, we don't eat animal genitalia...I fail to see the connection.