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Old 10-03-2007, 03:53 AM
Glendower Glendower is offline
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Default Looking for a Critique

From my local game.

I have AJ under the gun five handed. I raise to 13.
Player A to my left calls
Small Blind calls.
pot 41
Flop comes 9c10sQs
I make a continuation bet of 23
Player A raises to 50 (sb folds)
27 for 114. We each have 700 in front of us. I figure why not.
Turn comes Kc - I make the nuts.
I bet out 70 dollars into a pot of 141.
Player A thinks about it and calls. Pot is 281.
Turn cards comes 5c
I lead out 100.
Player waits, raises to 275.
I call and lose to the nut flush.

How could/should I have played this differently?
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:11 AM
herbstl herbstl is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

fold preflop !
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:16 AM
Quagmyer Quagmyer is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

stay home next time
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:17 AM
Dschmeidreu Dschmeidreu is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

Fold preflop or bet wayyyyyy more on the turn/flop if you're gonna continuation bet (which seems just like an AWFUL idea into 2 other players but whatever I suck at poker)

[x] Strategy in BBV that is probably not even very good.
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:18 AM
yeotaJMU yeotaJMU is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

what this doesnt make sense
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:20 AM
Xylocain Xylocain is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

open fold river, if you dont know that flush beat straight, then MAAAAAAYYYBBBEEEE you should not be playing for $$$ DUCY?
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:21 AM
DMoogle DMoogle is offline
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

I can't tell whether the two guys who said to fold PF are leveling...
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:23 AM
Dschmeidreu Dschmeidreu is offline
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Its a pretty clear open fold dude........dont know what's wrong with you :\
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:33 AM
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How could/should I have played this differently?

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Step one: get a can of corn...
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Old 10-03-2007, 04:40 AM
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Default Re: Looking for a Critique

try this
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