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Old 11-30-2007, 07:53 AM
Jules22 Jules22 is offline
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GEORGE: You want me to find a poem about Susan? May she rest in peace?!

WYCK: Well, we think it would be a nice touch for the Foundation literature. Do you have a favorite poet, George?

GEORGE: I like, uh... Flavnim

WYCK: Pardon?

GEORGE: Flavim
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Old 11-30-2007, 07:55 AM
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Green Eggs and Ham

Duh!
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Old 12-01-2007, 11:21 PM
voyamatarte voyamatarte is offline
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I like most of these poems posted so far, thanks!

I'm not sure if this is my favorite poem, but I know that I love spoken word poetry more than poetry made to be written. I think the addition of a fantastic reader can make the poem, and ideally you should listen to a recording of Francis reading this. I'd post a link, but all I can find is some weird techo-mashup on YouTube.

Sage Francis - Hopeless


I played connect the dots with your beauty marks
And I ended up with picture perfect sheet music
I read your musical notes with a composer's eyes
And heard our song for the first time
My spine is still tingling, mental images of your fine tune
is what I've been nodding my head to lately
Every now and then you can catch me humming
your nudity under my heavy breath
I heavily suggest you resurrect
your ancient neglected dust collector
If you distrust the distance in my seldom plucked heart strings
Sit stripped before your full length
Perform your reflection backwards
Maybe then you will understand the rhythm in my movement
Listen when the news is sent
Extend when the rules are bent
I'll be waiting to take your leave
Make me a victim of your two step
Make me an apprentice of your body parts
Teach me to dance to your beauty marks
I'm stepping on toes here and I don't care
It's hopeless, it's hopeless
It's hopelessness holding this openess to blow a kiss
So close your lips but don't get pissed
and throw a fist at this vocalist
I'm not emotionless, in fact I broke my wrist
when I wrote the list of all those I miss
This is my poker face, Mister Feel Nothing
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