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10-06-2007, 03:18 AM
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If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
I wrote something and I would just like insight and opinions from people other than myself. Feel free to post something you wrote yourself also, as I find them interesting to read, because everyone has different techniques naturally.
Where it says "Remeber this hun" I prounounce the world "this" like "deese". Other than that: Everything can end in one eye's blink +The Big Picture+, yup, that's the way I think I dreamed my future and I entered it If my life was a movie it'd be censored quick What's a dapper rapper if he's not a Poet like Poe is Yup, just another puppet of show biz Everyone's actors, people notice and knows this though some don't show it Sometimes you gotta work backwards to flow wit Everyone can't be it, but they see, the intricacies between, pedestrian and pedigree lots of chedda be, never livin regrettably Remember this hun trees is the keys to freedom it humbles me some blunts rolled like tumble weeds son Im done, like when the bumble bees stung, but not resting in peace nor deceased, One 
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10-06-2007, 03:29 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
im impressed, wheres the mp3?
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10-06-2007, 03:44 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
Who is Marcellus Wallus.
I don't know who Marcel is or what Top Chef is
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10-06-2007, 03:47 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
I haven't recorded it yet I wrote it today and I don't have good recording equipment yet. I also have to decide what beat im going to use, or if I'm going to make one.
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#8
10-06-2007, 05:09 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
"What's a dapper rapper if he's not a Poet like Poe is
Yup, just another puppet of show biz" That right there is FIRE. The verse overall is hot, but are you Jada Kiss or are you Biggie? In other words, writing a hot 16 is nice, but its relatively easy; the question is can you write 3 hot 16s with an 8 bar chorus?
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#9
10-06-2007, 05:17 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
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trees is the keys to freedom [/ QUOTE ] You're a hippie? ..kidding Intricacies seems like a hard word to rap, or at the very least, make sound tough. (unless you emphasize the 'tric' part of it) (I'll note that, while not really hip-hop, my favorite lyrics in this sorta format are Five Man Army by Massive Attack. Shouldn't be a popup on that site, apologies if there is one.)
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#10
10-06-2007, 05:55 AM
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Re: If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way
Poker, and rhyming, both hobbies flex my mind/
With these interests, I invest, my hard work and time in/ You gotta think fast, if you wanna kick ass/ Big bets, protecting your rep, both games got common features/ Can't go to college, to learn this knowledge, yet wisdom can come from teachers/ 2 Plus 2, is one big crew/ Sharing stories, all their glories/
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