My College Essay... - Page 4

highsteptd · #31 11-11-2007, 10:49 PM

our country's school system makes me sad

doubLe a tom · #32 11-11-2007, 10:52 PM

fold prebirth imo

sightless · #33 11-11-2007, 10:53 PM

is this for clown college or something?

doubLe a tom · #34 11-11-2007, 10:54 PM

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is this for clown college or something?

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u give him too much credit imo

JokersAttack · #35 11-11-2007, 10:57 PM

[x] stopped reading after about 10 words yet am convinced you suck at life, poker, and essay writing.

Dan87 · #36 11-11-2007, 11:02 PM

In this essay I will try to explain why poker has learned me to be a good person for your school and in what respect these poker lessons has taught him that he/she can succeed at life. I will repeat this many times in different wording to get the word count up.

doubLe a tom · #37 11-11-2007, 11:08 PM

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In this essay I will try to explain why poker has learned me to be a good person for your school and in what respect these poker lessons has taught him that he/she can succeed at life. I will repeat this many times in different wording to get the word count up.

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hi5

AE6 · #38 11-11-2007, 11:09 PM

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Competition is something I love.

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seriously, do you not see why this is a terrible sentence?

AE6 · #39 11-11-2007, 11:10 PM

not gonna lie, before i opened the thread i was 98% sure your essay would be about that one girl you're obsessed with

doublehawk · #40 11-11-2007, 11:12 PM

Try not writing about yourself. "I" is getting pretty repetitive.