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Re: Hows my Application Essay pt2
sorry but i got to the pb&j and couldn't go on. i'm sure the advice already posted is good.
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Re: Hows my Application Essay pt2
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sorry but i got to the pb&j and couldn't go on. i'm sure the advice already posted is good. [/ QUOTE ] fortunately it gets much better was anyone else thinking of this while reading the essay? |
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Re: Hows my Application Essay pt2
Definitely work on the intro. That's the hardest part of essays for me. I don't think it's necessary to name each specific league you were in... I got kind of lost in all the random letters. Just say something like you participated in a few leagues or either name the actual league name instead of it's initials.
BTW, my application essay was similar to this... it was about how I was a benchwarmer in basketball and hated it at first but it turned out to make me a better person yada yada yada |
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