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Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint
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"Later that night we finished off another case of beer and went out in the boat again." -would perhaps sound better as- "Later that night, after we'd finished yet another case of Labatt, we again found ourselves out on the lake." [/ QUOTE ] i disagree. I like the rest of what you said. I'll add some sensory detail to my "king of the dock" paragraph edit: actually I like the way you rewrote that line too |
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Re: Bad beat stories w/some Paint
btw im in community college so I get an A if I make <1 spelling mistake/word
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None of these are bad beats! You pwned some Frenchies, went 1-0-1 in chess, and then didn't get mangled. These are all total brags. Also, this could be better if you had a gf and posted pics of her too.
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None of these are bad beats! You pwned some Frenchies, went 1-0-1 in chess, and then didn't get mangled. These are all total brags. Also, this could be better if you had a gf and posted pics of her too. [/ QUOTE ] I'm not him, but it can count for him that my GF is my Avatar... |
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tl dr
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I read the first sentence and then looked at the pictures and typed this and now am leaving [/ QUOTE ] You missed out. Very nice post OP. |
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holy god there is no way I'm reading this. Correctly formatted paragraphs (correctly formatted for the respective forum, not converted from Word) go a long way in having someone want to read something.
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did BJ die? if not then why are there X's in is eyes?
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did BJ die? if not then why are there X's in is eyes? [/ QUOTE ] no, but he was all like "ow" edit: btw I handed this in today, with a few modifications |
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