If you like hip hop and you like original lyrics read this way

[TheBigPicture]

I wrote something and I would just like insight and opinions from people other than myself. Feel free to post something you wrote yourself also, as I find them interesting to read, because everyone has different techniques naturally.

Where it says "Remeber this hun" I prounounce the world "this" like "deese". Other than that:


Everything can end in one eye's blink
+The Big Picture+, yup, that's the way I think
I dreamed my future and I entered it
If my life was a movie it'd be censored quick
What's a dapper rapper if he's not a Poet like Poe is
Yup, just another puppet of show biz
Everyone's actors, people notice and knows this
though some don't show it
Sometimes you gotta work backwards to flow wit
Everyone can't be it, but they see,
the intricacies between, pedestrian and pedigree
lots of chedda be, never livin regrettably
Remember this hun
trees is the keys to freedom
it humbles me some
blunts rolled like tumble weeds son
Im done, like when the bumble bees stung,
but not resting in peace nor deceased,

One