Is this a good proposal ??

[Eddie Matos]

Ok, thought I'd ask guys/ladies think about my idea on how to propose...

Me & my girlfridn have been together for 8 years, we have 3 kids together & been
living together for those eight years... Well you might ask how come it's taking me this long. The truth is that she always wanted to get married but I guess I was not ready but now I am. (yes I do love her & I'm ready to take it to the next step).

Her & I owe a time share we bought some years back & our week is in two weeks so we will be spending it in orlando FL with about 20 people of my family.
I was thinking of proposing to her infront of everybody at this Pirate dinner show we will be attending. I already called & asked the place to see if this is possible & they said yes... They have a package that will cost me $120 that includes champaign & other stuff.. Do you guys think that my proposal will be corny ?
She's not a shy girl she likes center of attention on the other hand I'm the shy person to get infront of an audience but I'm willing to do this.... what do you all think ?