a poem i wrote (post yours or critique mine)

[xxThe_Lebowskixx]

love is a four letter word
it sings lovely like a bird
your hair is black and divine
oh please god wont you be mine

we struggle and life is unfair
so we think in our hearts, does anyone care?
you are only eleven years old
but i shall let it be told
please control your fears
it will only be seven more years

Saaya Irie