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On You Tube, Heinz 57 is running a do-it-yourself commercial contest. Winnar gets $57K. My buddy did a poker video, starring yours truly. I get a sig portion of the winnings, since I added a bunch of my own ideas. So, please do me a favor: watch the video, and give me some feedback. Then, if it makes the cut, you can all vote on it, make me robusto, then take back your monies by playing me on FTP.
PS: I'm obv the dude gettin' aces cracked. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HzBV7jV1Egs |
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Pretty good......I lol'd
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2 pair 5s and 7s!!!!!
i give this video a 8.9 HoLLa |
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nice
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Thats actually pretty good. The only problem is that you are asking a poker website about feedback. Obviously we are going to be biased because of the poker aspect of it. Definitly try getting feedback outside the poker community. The only part I would change is when the guy is staring up the shorts of the other guy at the end. Looks kind of like teh ghey.
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Thats actually pretty good. The only problem is that you are asking a poker website about feedback. Obviously we are going to be biased because of the poker aspect of it. Definitly try getting feedback outside the poker community. The only part I would change is when the guy is staring up the shorts of the other guy at the end. Looks kind of like teh ghey. [/ QUOTE ] Funny thing is, my buddy had the idea for the poker theme. My only real contribution was that when all was said and done, we look down and see the fat guy still eating the ketchup off the garage floor. I thought that would give it the humor needed to compete. However, of the feedback given on You Tube, they all say things like, "Get the dude off the floor", or, "I'd change the end...having a guy eating off the floor is weird." So, my main contribution is the cooler. Fantastic (for Nacho Libre fans: "Fantasteek...I lawf eet") Anyway, what would you do to the end of it? |
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it'd be funnier if he stabbed the guy with the broken bottle
you know, cause he would die get it, die? DIE DIE DIE DIE HAHAHAAHAhaahaHAHAh |
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PSA: THE ABOVE COMMENT IS A DRAMATIZATION AND DID NOT HAPPEN
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would make for a good scene though
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Cut the end off. Although its comical, It isn't appetizing which is something your usually trying to acheive marketing a food product. I think if you want to avoid reshooting you could just cut the scene out completely and end it with your face expressions. It conveys the same messege without being over the top
edit- cut out the eye raising as well. |
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