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i a/m shiva the death god
[Edit - my twelve-year-old brother wrote this. B, B, or V?]
that time, again when the world gets too round and spins out a dotted line three blinks long and then stare three blinks long and then stare the point is here there you are--- pull sounds in your mouth but feathers don't really rustle in the wind like they're torn wings rustle in the wind like they're torn wings castling my truths in big walls walls of i'm sorry and not so much well at least i'm alone let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming these eyes mask worlds when they close i'll pin them open with swords we'll be spinning home then i rend souls like shiva i rend souls like shiva |
#2
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
too soon imo
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#3
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
kill your brother before he kills the world first
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
I picked up halfway through
[ QUOTE ] castling my truths in big walls [/ QUOTE ] g3 Bg2 Nf3 O-O [ QUOTE ] walls of i'm sorry and [/ QUOTE ] ... h5 ... g5 ... h4 [ QUOTE ] not so much [/ QUOTE ] ... hxg3 hxg3 [ QUOTE ] well at least i'm alone [/ QUOTE ] ... g4 Ne1 Bxg2 Nxg2 [ QUOTE ] let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming [/ QUOTE ] ... Rh3 ... Rah8 [ QUOTE ] these eyes mask worlds when they close [/ QUOTE ] Nh4 [ QUOTE ] i'll pin them open with swords [/ QUOTE ] ... R8xh4 [ QUOTE ] we'll be spinning home then [/ QUOTE ] gxh4 Rxh4 [ QUOTE ] i rend souls like shiva i rend souls like shiva [/ QUOTE ] ... Qh8 ... Rh1+ |
#5
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
haha you gonna get raped
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
If a 12-yr old wrote that, I think he's got real potential as a lyricist.
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
um the only thing this kid is rending with this song is his nap time and apple juice
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
No he's not, he's a very naughty boy.
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Re: i a/m shiva the death god
emo imo
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