Opinions and Criticisms wanted. NLTRN

[Odalist]

Entire HH for a hu sng I played, sorry for the bad quality but I just started saving my Hand historys. I'd like anyone to critique it, I'm new to playing HU online and I've been playing the $2+.15 sng's on full tilt. Please no jokes about my stakes, we all had to start somewhere.

Anyways, here it is. Let me know if you see any problems with my game, wasn't too long but I've had some friends question some of my plays (like the call with Q3 suited where I floped a set) and after reading this forum for such a long time I decided to join and ask your guys' opinions on my playing as well.

Hope this is cool with everyone [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]


Dealer: Hand #2537183029
Dealer: You have been dealt [4s 5d]
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 10
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: The flop is [5c As Qh]
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: The turn is [5s]
Dealer: Odalist bets 40
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 40 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (40)

Dealer: Hand #2537185695
Dealer: Odalist posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [7d 8s]
Dealer: Odalist raises to 40
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 20
Dealer: The flop is [6h Jc 8c]
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: Odalist bets 80
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 80 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (80)

Dealer: Hand #2537187995
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: Odalist posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [8c 3d]
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 10
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: The flop is [Ad 5c 3h]
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: The turn is [Kh]
Dealer: Odalist bets 40
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 40
Dealer: The river is [Th]
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: Odalist shows a pair of Threes
Dealer: made in Alberta mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (120) with a pair of Threes

Dealer: Hand #2537192033
Dealer: Odalist posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [4c 5h]
Dealer: Odalist raises to 40
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 20
Dealer: The flop is [Qc Ts 4h]
Dealer: made in Alberta bets 20
Dealer: Odalist raises to 50
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 30 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (120)

Dealer: Hand #2537194452
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: Odalist posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [3c Qc]
Dealer: made in Alberta raises to 40
Dealer: Odalist calls 20
Dealer: The flop is [3h 3d Ah]
Dealer: Odalist bets 40
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 40
Dealer: The turn is [Jc]
Dealer: Odalist bets 115
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 115
Dealer: The river is [Ac]
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: made in Alberta bets 240
Dealer: Odalist calls 240
Dealer: made in Alberta shows two pair, Aces and Kings
Dealer: Odalist shows a full house, Threes full of Aces
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (870) with a full house, Threes full of
Aces

Dealer: Hand #2537199385
Dealer: Odalist posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [Qd 3h]
Dealer: Odalist calls 10
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: The flop is [2s 4h 8s]
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: Odalist bets 40
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 40 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (40)

Dealer: Hand #2537201220
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: Odalist posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [Qs Qh]
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 10 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist shows [Qs Qh] (a pair of Queens)
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (20)

Dealer: Hand #2537202275
Dealer: Odalist posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [8s Qs]
Dealer: Odalist raises to 60
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 40 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (40)

Dealer: Hand #2537204015
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: Odalist posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [3s 6d]
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 10
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: The flop is [Jd 9s 4d]
Dealer: Odalist checks
Dealer: made in Alberta checks
Dealer: The turn is [Ac]
Dealer: Odalist bets 40
Dealer: made in Alberta folds
Dealer: Uncalled bet of 40 returned to Odalist
Dealer: Odalist mucks
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (40)

Dealer: Hand #2537206414
Dealer: Odalist posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [Th 4h]
Dealer: Odalist raises to 40
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 20
Dealer: The flop is [Kc 4s 3d]
Dealer: made in Alberta bets 20
Dealer: Odalist calls 20
Dealer: The turn is [Kd]
Dealer: made in Alberta bets 20
Dealer: Odalist calls 20
Dealer: The river is [2c]
Dealer: made in Alberta bets 20
Dealer: Odalist calls 20
Dealer: made in Alberta shows a pair of Kings
Dealer: Odalist shows two pair, Kings and Fours
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (200) with two pair, Kings and Fours

Dealer: Hand #2537209617
Dealer: made in Alberta posts the small blind of 10
Dealer: Odalist posts the big blind of 20
Dealer: You have been dealt [Qh Ah]
Dealer: made in Alberta raises to 200
Dealer: Odalist calls 180
Dealer: The flop is [5s 7h Ad]
Dealer: Odalist bets 515
Dealer: made in Alberta calls 515, and is all in
Dealer: Odalist shows [Qh Ah]
Dealer: made in Alberta shows [2s Ac]
Dealer: The turn is [Jc]
made in Alberta: gg
Dealer: The river is [7s]
Dealer: Odalist shows two pair, Aces and Sevens
Dealer: made in Alberta shows two pair, Aces and Sevens
Dealer: Odalist wins the pot (1,430) with two pair, Aces and Sevens
Dealer: made in Alberta stands up
Dealer: Odalist stands up
Odalist (Observer): gg