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Old 10-16-2007, 05:35 AM
Popinjay Popinjay is offline
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Default poem i wrote. tell me what you think

would like honest opinions pls... i'm a big boy, i can take it. if you think it sucks tell me, but tell me why.

untitled by le popinjay

i don't care... but

i do.

why?

god is love

so says the bible

so says my intuition

but i don't believe in god...

a resistance to establishment

to hypocrisy

truth distorted

love lost

confusion and darkness spread unnecessarily.

should one live their live

for what they believe in?

yes it only sounds right

but in that fleeting stillness

what sounds penetrate

the clear shimmers of our life?

faith

something i lost a long time ago

so long i can't ever remember

having it.

something unknown to me now

those things are the hardest

to learn, if it's

possible at all... dream

i am

just like a dream

fuzzy and scattered

certain moments

shine through

others lost and found

again in times when not

looking for them at all.

god is love

and i am god
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