[Zutroy]

I think there are definitely a few ways to interrupt the story and I really like the one mentioned in Taso post, though I must admit I had a different take, which I will likely outline later (though I will say that the title is fairly important and Everett and the Priest have something in common, despite being largely different.)

Fantasies of Jessica Fazer - This story leads very well and I like the colloquial, realistic sounding dialogue mixed with the well-written narration. The build up is well done and the theme is presented clearly, though not too obviously. Plus, bonus points for "Shee-it" [img]/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img].