Thread: Hows my Application Essay pt2
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Old 11-13-2007, 12:09 AM
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Default Re: Hows my Application Essay pt2
Topic is good.

As others have said, just tighten it up, get rid of the PBJ analogy, and replace the word "thing" when you find yourself using it too much.
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