Thread: Grotesquely nerdy theatre geekery for DBZ
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Old 11-21-2007, 12:35 AM
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Default Re: Grotesquely nerdy theatre geekery for DBZ
I'm a theatre nerd too, so I have to be picky here

5th line doesn't work-emphasis is on the "ften" part of often
8th line only has 4 feet-is this intentional?
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