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Old 12-01-2007, 06:00 PM
Taso Taso is offline
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Default Re: Writing Competition: Discussion Thread

Just read It's Only a Game, written by Daffyduck.

Honestly, when I started it I felt slightly dissapointed that I was about to read a "sports" story - that changed completly as I went on.

It was extremly well told, if it were a movie I'd say it was perfectly edited, meaning, it could have been written all linearly, but the different segments made it awesome. As I read, I realized it was more a story of a man's dreams. By the end of it, once I knew how much was riding on that golf shot, I was as anxious as "he" was.

Very well written, good read.
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