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Old 11-16-2007, 01:42 AM
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Default Re: Noobs Post your hands here, I will answer them

cakewalk, I think some of it is rather redundant. I think you can delete some sentences here that are just reiterating the point that Alzheimer's is a debilitating disease that as of yet has no cure. Also you missed a comma "The only visible cuts, bruises or scrapes of Alzheimer’s."
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