Re: Writing Competition: Discussion Thread
Just read It's Only a Game, written by Daffyduck.
Honestly, when I started it I felt slightly dissapointed that I was about to read a "sports" story - that changed completly as I went on.
It was extremly well told, if it were a movie I'd say it was perfectly edited, meaning, it could have been written all linearly, but the different segments made it awesome. As I read, I realized it was more a story of a man's dreams. By the end of it, once I knew how much was riding on that golf shot, I was as anxious as "he" was.
Very well written, good read.
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