Re: NFL QB Article
given the drivel that sports writers typically write, he's got a head-start.
nah there's several problems, namely the use of first person (who does he think he is, tony kornheiser?), use of rhetorical questions and similar filler - there's all sorts of words that are superfluous, and in journalism that's a killer - space is of the essence. The 'article' could likely convey all the same information in half the space.
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