Re: Master letter thread
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That being said, it's a very good letter overall. The main thing I noticed is that you wrote about IGREA, but you make points against it in your letter, inclcuding the one against casinos and gambling. You also discuss poker as skill, which is not part of IGREA. I guess you intending to write this in favor of Wexler's skill game letter? If so, change the name of the legislation and it will generally be fine.
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So I am conflating two different types of legislation? Much of what I wrote about legislation was pieced together from some pretty sketchy sources. So Frank's legislation has nothing to do with skill? This is something else entirely?
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I'd list James XXX's credentials as well (not a biography -- either accreditations after his name or "Dr." before).
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The work I will be quoting is James Paul Gee, if anyone wants to take a look at it. He is one of the most well known professors of education & literacy in the country, not that that would make him well known to anyone but other education people [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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