Re: My Hooker Story
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Now, reread what he wrote about clothes, talking to some girl about poker and money etc. They're not essiental in any way. They TAKE from the story, which is a huge fault. He didn't write details, he wrote dumb ramblings. If you want to argue this, you're a moron.
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OK, slowly this time, for the hard of thinking.
The fact that OP and his friend talked about conspiracy theories and sat around in bars instead of picking up girls was relevant and interesting because it established character and motivation for the later part of the story.
I don't know OP from Adam but I got an impression of him and JC from what you persist in thinking is irrelevant detail. Without that, the story is just two guys doing stupid things, with it, you have sympathy for the characters.
I'll wager you've never written anything half as entertaining as the OP. Patronising and boorish on the other hand, you've got nailed.
Come on, post and lets see.
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