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also, from the "resume", drop this;

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Experience in starting own business previously

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this imo is kind of an orly? situation. people are going to laugh at this.

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why? what if he has legitimate experience starting his own business?

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my point was, its probably not as legitimate as he thinks. i don't know his situation, but if hes in college looking for a temporary job, odds are his business wasn't a huge success.

though this is moot as OP responded to it and explained that it was legitimate and he just didn't describe it well.