Thread: Grotesquely nerdy theatre geekery for DBZ
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Old 11-20-2007, 10:35 PM
GeraldGiraffe GeraldGiraffe is offline
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Default Re: Grotesquely nerdy theatre geekery for DBZ
Rhyme scheme too standard imo, but the Volte is nice. Could have done with a lacuna to make it more clear, obv.
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