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a short story I just wrote
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09-12-2007, 12:03 AM
rothko
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Re: a short story I just wrote
ungood. there isn't enough happening. too many words with too little impact. tighten it. try to grab and maintain the reader's attention. going into the dorm to sell a magazine really isn't story worthy, on its own.
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