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Idea 1: A bay-area thriller centered around El Diablo as the primary witness of a brutal murder....



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Awesome!

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So let's expand it: what would ElD have been doing leading up to this point? Who would he have seen and what conversations would have taken place, where would he have gone? Where did this murder happen? Who was murdered and who murdered? How did ElD react; did he attempt to prevent it or did he hide so as not to be seen? Did the murderer see him? What does ElD do then? What's he like at this point; composed, scared, jittery? What happens next?