Re: a poem i wrote (post yours or critique mine)
I call this "To my one love, on the night of our consummation:"
My love for you is stronger than an ocean tide,
Yet fragile as the sweetest teardrop,
Hey, you're not a cop right?
You have to tell me if you're a cop.
My love has no concern for propriety,
It cares not for polite or punctual.
Oh, um, you're fully functional, yes?
The ad said fully functional.
There is love unbound in one of your words,
Desire infinite in your laugh,
[censored] you bitch, if I only cum once,
You only get half.
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