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Old 05-01-2007, 10:29 PM
Dane S Dane S is offline
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Default Re: Please respond: a short fiction piece

Maybe you could stress the "signing" part a bit by describing the actual motion she makes with her hands? Like, "his wife touched her fingers and her thumb together, then moved them in a circle, signing..." Perhaps something like this would draw closer attention to this critical sentence.
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