Thread: Please respond: a short fiction piece
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Old 04-30-2007, 02:26 AM
John Feeney John Feeney is offline
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Default Re: Please respond: a short fiction piece
"the story needs to end with a punch, not punch blah blah blah my heart fluttered."

Yeah, but I think the punch is in learning he's deaf.
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