Re: Atheistoxity
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I am a long time browser and I ran across this poem that I thought I'd post here. Enjoy browsing the forum though.
Atheistoxity
What is the purpose, where is my place,
in this planet that's in orbit, a tiny dot in space.
The gift of feeling, do I abuse?
Is there a wrong? Am I that confused?
Why should I try, were all just gonna die,
my body will decay, my loved ones tears will dry.
Why can't I puff a cig, be gay and wear a wig,
thread my vain with a needle, if that's what I wanna feel.
If I can't see, then I can't believe,
what a man can't prove, I cannot conceive.
Simple are my desires as they are relative to my need,
Carnal is my only pleasure, for it's what I can instantly heed.
Narcissistic mind, the book whoring trend
accepting my faults, the only time I spend.
Is this all an agenda? A brainwashing genius plan,
did I plant a seed that can't stop growing, it's hard just being a man.
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That change in the rhyme structure is irritating to me. I'm glad Phil's version fixes it.
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