[brick]

Hi Ray,
I liked your article and sent it to my Dad. I called you a 'poker old timer'. Is that an accurate title?

I give you a 4 of 5 for two reasons: (5 of 5 would mean perfect)

1) the article could use some editing. There were a few spots I had to reread several times to understand correctly.

2) related to 1, maybe the editor could edit in a an upbeat line or two. Maybe calling the article "Three Simple Lessons" or adding a line to the intro that would get me jazzed to learn these 3 simple lessons.


all in all, I like the article. Looking forward to visiting Montana soon and seeing your ranch.