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Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,

Somebody record something. This writing [censored] is getting tired. Putting it in writing and actually rhyming over a beat are two different things and two different skills altogether. You are not rapping here.

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I have to respectfully disagree, pshabi. Obviously I see your point but the pure written has merit as well, sometimes more. There's nothing to hind behind; beats, gimmicks, et cetera. The words really need to stand on their own.

That said, I think your rhyme really did. It didn't need anything else to enhance it and enjoy it.