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Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 05-02-2007, 05:10 PM
Replies: 53
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Posted By writername
Re: Please respond: a short fiction piece

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It is not until "...entire room to hear" that we are certain they are in a restaurant.

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I'm fairly certain they are in a home setting. I won't ask Solo to confirm this...
Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 05-01-2007, 09:57 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 280
Posted By writername
Re: Please respond: a short fiction piece

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Second, to me the story seems to be from the point of view of Jackson. So when the reader learns that Emily garbles out "Dada!" loud enough for everyone to hear, it's...
Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 05-01-2007, 05:00 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 78
Posted By writername
Re: 2700 Word Short Story

To both readers, I thank and applaud you. These are more constructive responses than I probably ever received from students in undergraduate English, I'd say they were on par with my English teachers...
Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 04-30-2007, 09:31 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 280
Posted By writername
Re: Please respond: a short fiction piece

I think the twist is very clever. I'm feeling perplexed as to how to critique such ultrashort fiction, but the fact that this blurb extracted a smirk from me is certainly a good thing.

One line...
Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 04-30-2007, 09:14 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 78
Posted By writername
Re: 2700 Word Short Story

Shouldn't have prefaced that. I spent maybe 60-90 min editing, but I normally spend hours and hours before I get to a "finished product" if I am even willing to call it that.

The note about tense...
Forum: The Lounge: Discussion+Review 04-29-2007, 02:57 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 78
Posted By writername
2700 Word Short Story

I've recently written a short story and thought I'd try to take advantage of this board in soliciting some response to it. I'm using a different screenname for people I've never met through the...
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