Atheistoxity
 

I am a long time browser and I ran across this poem that I thought I'd post here. Enjoy browsing the forum though.

Atheistoxity

What is the purpose, where is my place,
in this planet that's in orbit, a tiny dot in space.

The gift of feeling, do I abuse?
Is there a wrong? Am I that confused?

Why should I try, were all just gonna die,
my body will decay, my loved ones tears will dry.

Why can't I puff a cig, be gay and wear a wig,
thread my vain with a needle, if that's what I wanna feel.

If I can't see, then I can't believe,
what a man can't prove, I cannot conceive.

Simple are my desires as they are relative to my need,
Carnal is my only pleasure, for it's what I can instantly heed.

Narcissistic mind, the book whoring trend
accepting my faults, the only time I spend.

Is this all an agenda? A brainwashing genius plan,
did I plant a seed that can't stop growing, it's hard just being a man.

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Theistoxity

What is the purpose, where is my place,
God made it all, and I'm gonna be saved.

The gift of thinking, do I abuse?
Is there a truth? Am I that confused?

Why should I try, as long as I believe,
The God up in heaven, will give me reprieve.

I can't puff a cig, be gay and wear a wig,
God makes that bad, I'll get put in the brig!

If I can't see, then I believe even more,
what a man can't prove, is proven for sure!

Simple are my beliefs as they relate to my need,
Escape is my only pleasure, for it's all I can heed.

Narcissistic mind, the Jesus whoring trend
Me and my kind go there, the place where I want to end.

Is this all an agenda? A brainwashing genius plan,
What if there was no God? It's hard being just a man.

So give me the Jesus wafers, I'm a good little cookie
I'll swallow them whole, and refrain from the nookie.

Re: Atheistoxity
 

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I am a long time browser and I ran across this poem that I thought I'd post here. Enjoy browsing the forum though.

Atheistoxity

What is the purpose, where is my place,
in this planet that's in orbit, a tiny dot in space.

The gift of feeling, do I abuse?
Is there a wrong? Am I that confused?

Why should I try, were all just gonna die,
my body will decay, my loved ones tears will dry.


Why can't I puff a cig, be gay and wear a wig,
thread my vain with a needle, if that's what I wanna feel.

If I can't see, then I can't believe,
what a man can't prove, I cannot conceive.

Simple are my desires as they are relative to my need,
Carnal is my only pleasure, for it's what I can instantly heed.

Narcissistic mind, the book whoring trend
accepting my faults, the only time I spend.

Is this all an agenda? A brainwashing genius plan,
did I plant a seed that can't stop growing, it's hard just being a man.

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That change in the rhyme structure is irritating to me. I'm glad Phil's version fixes it.

Re: Atheistoxity
 

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So give me the Jesus wafers, I'm a good little cookie
I'll swallow them whole, and refrain from the nookie.

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Good work, sir. [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Re: Atheistoxity
 

Phil,

A+

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Must of been a chore to twist a couple words! But I can see how u would feel threatened to leave as is.....

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Must of been a chore to twist a couple words! But I can see how u would feel threatened to leave as is.....



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What about your poem, Wiiiiman, do you find threatening to Atheists? At first I thought it was extolling the virtues of your typical atheist, until I saw the title that had the word toxic in it. But it indicates that atheists are non- judgmental about gays and people who wear wigs, and they are book whores ( whatever that means, but I assume that they like to read ).

I’ve heard Phil say that he thinks homosexuality is a mental disease, which is actually ok. People don’t generally bash in peoples' heads because they have an unfortunate disease. But if you choose to be a sinner, well then. . .

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Must of been a chore to twist a couple words! But I can see how u would feel threatened to leave as is.....

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Twisting words is not my game
I was looking to be fresh.
The final stanza I really liked
I thought it would impress!

Shakespeare said that poetry
is music made from words
But rhyming poems seem to me
Like squeezing out some ...

But threatened I am not
And discussion I'll oblige
But you need to write in prose
And bring an open mind...

Welcome to SMP.

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Must of been a chore to twist a couple words! But I can see how u would feel threatened to leave as is.....

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Twisting words is not my game
I was looking to be fresh.
The final stanza I really liked
I thought it would impress!

Shakespeare said that poetry
is music made from words
But rhyming poems seem to me
Like squeezing out some ...

But threatened I am not
And discussion I'll oblige
But you need to write in prose
And bring an open mind...

Welcome to SMP.

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Wiiiiiiman has been pwned
but if only this he'd knowned,
he'd toss god on a dung heap
and dare take the atheist mind-leap.

(apologies to Phil who really did do a fine job)