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KilgoreTrout 08-30-2007 04:57 PM

Labor Day (poem by KT)
 
Labor Day

Bronze blades of Gethsemane’s grasses
Lay siege to sites erstwhile honored,
Oft remembered, but now forgotten.
I comb the mottled hill for yours –
Obscured by summer’s graying whiskers –
And stoop, dumbfounded by memory.
The site untended swells soil underfoot
As duty drives hands into tangled turf,
Tearing away tufts of encircling sod.
A glance, and greener grass encroaches.
Earth, clutching them close to her breast,
Cradles names plotted at sorrow’s behest.

I labor this day in spite of time
For this one’s name is akin to mine.

Phat Mack 09-01-2007 01:44 PM

Re: Labor Day (poem by KT)
 
This one grew on me.

KilgoreTrout 09-05-2007 01:46 PM

Re: Labor Day (poem by KT)
 
Thanks, man.

MrWookie 09-05-2007 03:18 PM

Re: Labor Day (poem by KT)
 
For me, it's hard to discuss poetry, but I like your use of language here. Nice job.


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