i a/m shiva the death god
 

[Edit - my twelve-year-old brother wrote this. B, B, or V?]

that time, again
when the world gets
too round and spins out a dotted line

three blinks long and then stare
three blinks long and then stare

the point is here
there you are---
pull sounds in your mouth
but feathers don't really

rustle in the wind like they're torn wings
rustle in the wind like they're torn wings

castling my truths in big walls
walls of i'm sorry and
not so much
well at least i'm alone

let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming
let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming

these eyes
mask worlds when they close
i'll pin them open with swords
we'll be spinning home then

i rend souls like shiva
i rend souls like shiva

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

too soon imo

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

kill your brother before he kills the world first

plz

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

I picked up halfway through

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castling my truths in big walls

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g3
Bg2
Nf3
O-O

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walls of i'm sorry and

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... h5
... g5
... h4

[ QUOTE ]
not so much

[/ QUOTE ]

... hxg3
hxg3

[ QUOTE ]
well at least i'm alone

[/ QUOTE ]

... g4
Ne1 Bxg2
Nxg2

[ QUOTE ]
let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming
let's drown this dog in the baptismal foaming


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... Rh3
... Rah8


[ QUOTE ]
these eyes
mask worlds when they close

[/ QUOTE ]

Nh4

[ QUOTE ]
i'll pin them open with swords

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... R8xh4

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we'll be spinning home then

[/ QUOTE ]

gxh4 Rxh4

[ QUOTE ]
i rend souls like shiva
i rend souls like shiva

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... Qh8
... Rh1+

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

haha you gonna get raped

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

If a 12-yr old wrote that, I think he's got real potential as a lyricist.

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

um the only thing this kid is rending with this song is his nap time and apple juice

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

No he's not, he's a very naughty boy.

Re: i a/m shiva the death god
 

emo imo