And the Winner Is:

[Roxysurfergirl00]

Here is another revised version of my WCHS&SHLHE. I took Earl's suggestion into consideration and moved the "world class" from the corner to the left top and changed the kerning and the leading a bit. I added the space for Alan Schoonmaker's picture, and enlarged the Club in the back in order to fit the author's on the spine inside of it. I think it looks much better with the changed title.

[Mason Malmuth]

Hi Roxysurfergirl00:

One suggestion. On the back cover the order of the picutres from left to right should be Ray Zee, David Fromm, and then Alan Schoonmaker.

Best wishes,
Mason

[Roxysurfergirl00]

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Hi Roxysurfergirl00:

One suggestion. On the back cover the order of the picutres from left to right should be Ray Zee, David Fromm, and then Alan Schoonmaker.

Best wishes,
Mason

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Thanks Mason. I fixed the name order and made some changes to the title. The "and" is now Mistral font, and on the spine I changed the author's names to black (still undecided on which color I like better).

~Marci~

[Mason Malmuth]

Hi Roxysurfergirl00:

I think we're very close. I like the second version better:



The only fix I would ask for now is that the word "with" on both the spine and front cover not be in the fancy script. I think that makes the cover appear a little too busy and puts emphasis in the wrong place. But leave "World Class" in the script as you have it.

Once this small change is made, we'll have a great cover.

Best wishes,
Mason

[Roxysurfergirl00]

Hi Mason,

I made the changes and the word "with" is now in Arial font. Let me know what you think. [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]



~Marcia~

[Mason Malmuth]

Hi Roxysurfergirl00:

I think that does it. Now all we need to do is get this downloaded to the printer -- they'll be calling you if they haven't already; and of course we need to finish this manuscript (which is almost done).

Best wishes,
Mason

[Gonso]

Mason, mine was submitted last week. If there are any issues or changes needed, please let me know ASAP, my schedule is going to be very tight for the next couple of weeks.

Also, what's the rough timeline for your next series of books? That is, when should I have the other submission done by?

[J.A.Sucker]

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Hi Mason,

I made the changes and the word "with" is now in Arial font. Let me know what you think. [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]



~Marcia~

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Hi Roxy,

Your cover looks fantastic! Now all you have to do is photoshop Zee's picture on the back so that people checking out the back cover don't get scared off by him.

Thanks,

Dave

[xjimraketex]

im so gonna buy PNL!
the cover artwork alone is worth buyin it!