Please respond: a short fiction piece

[John Feeney]

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nobody cares about jackson. the story doesn't care and the reader doesn't care.

edit: on second thought, i'm gonna go with john on this one. disregard my previous comments on this point. in fact, i am insisting that you keep that angle in there.

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Heh, I can go along with that. [img]/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]