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Old 03-11-2007, 11:11 PM
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Default Re: Post your favorite poem (by yourself or others)

This isn't necessarily my favorite poem. But, one of many favorites by one of my favorite writers, Charles Bukowski.

The text suffers from the censoring software; some of its power is reduced by the omissions. Without the harsh language the juxtaposition of the writing is somewhat lost.

Like A Flower In The Rain

I cut the middle fingernail of the middle
finger
right hand
real short
and I began rubbing along her [censored]
as she sat upright in bed
spreading lotion over her arms
face
and breasts
after bathing.
then she lit a cigarette:
"don't let this put you off,"
an smoked and continued to rub
the lotion on.
I continued to rub the [censored].
"You want an apple?" I asked.
"sure, she said, "you got one?"
but I got to her-
she began to twist
then she rolled on her side,
she was getting wet and open
like a flower in the rain.
then she rolled on her stomach
and her most beautiful ass
looked up at me
and I reached under and got the
[censored] again.
she reached around and got my
[censored], she rolled and twisted,
I mounted
my face falling into the mass
of red hair that overflowed
from her head
and my flattened [censored] entered
into the miracle.
later we joked about the lotion
and the cigarette and the apple.
then I went out and got some chicken
and shrimp and french fries and buns
and mashed potatoes and gravy and
cole slaw,and we ate.she told me
how good she felt and I told her
how good I felt and we
ate the chicken and the shrimp and the
french fries and the buns and the
mashed potatoes and the gravy and
the cole slaw too.
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