Busted Draw...good spot for river raise?

[franchise99]

This is my second post in this forum that has gotten no real substantive responses. Granted, it has only been one hour this time, but as my posts moves onto the second page I fear it disappearing from the board's consciousness. I'm trying to figure out what makes this post less interesting to the board than others. Is it too standard, obvious, clearly bad or good? Anyways, if there's no interest that is cool, but any feedback on how to improve my posts would be great so that I don't continue making posts that are of little interest.

Thanks,

Chise