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Just got my profile up and starting messaging randoms. It really is much weirder than approaching a random girl at a bar. Anyways, i struggled alot with my "about me" and "who i'd like to meet" on my profile. Any ideas on how to make them better?
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My only observations revolve around more confident statements with action verbs. Stuff like "i guess" "i think" well get you into the LJBF category, but no further.
For example, you know why you are in St. Louis, don't waffle about it.
The rest of your stuff looked great. Nice pics...show you having fun, smiling, and with good friends. Interest is all standard.