[Ship Ship McGipp]

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Blah fk college I have to write a 10 page short story by tomorrow, and I refuse to have someone do it for me because this is the one teacher I like and would feel bad by cheating him, and also he seems like too smart of a guy and probably knows my lousy writing style.

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i noticed lately you have been using capitalization and punctuation, i just want to note that that is a good start.